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You look at me,
like another leaf.
But when you look at her,
to you, it's like looking at the only tree,
in the entire forest.

You look up and see me,
like a cloudy day.
But when you look up and see her,
It's like seeing the sun

You look at me,
like a glass of water.
But when you see her,
It's like seeing the ocean, the lake.

What do I have to do to be your girl,
like how she's your girl?
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:iconironman2055:
It sort of pettered out at the end >_>.

Nice beginning though :D

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:iconmellyburstofbayum:
WOOHOO~

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Roses are red, Violets are blue, sugar is sweet, and so are-Oh fuck this.
[link] Visit please ;D
:iconironman2055:
:D

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:iconlizzie-beth:
I like this a hell of a lot. Excellent work :)

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i only had to be cut once to know how to bleed...
:iconmellyburstofbayum:
LOL

I dont really like it,
but thanks xD

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Roses are red, Violets are blue, sugar is sweet, and so are-Oh fuck this.
[link] Visit please ;D
:iconlizzie-beth:
no one likes their own work :)

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i only had to be cut once to know how to bleed...
:iconmellyburstofbayum:
.. True.

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Roses are red, Violets are blue, sugar is sweet, and so are-Oh fuck this.
[link] Visit please ;D

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